ACCUSATIONS at the general Poetic Masses hereabouts, TorF?

You do not Duel because...

you despise Mahayr.	4.2%	[ 1 ]
you despise someone else in here.	12.5%	[ 3 ]
you are, as accused, CHICKEN!	8.3%	[ 2 ]
it is beneath you, you are just that good. BUT too chicken to prove it.	0.0%	[ 0 ]
you have too much on your plate for lowly duels, and are CHICKEN!	4.2%	[ 1 ]
there is not enough to be gained, you are greedy.	25.0%	[ 6 ]
Other... post your own answer.	45.8%	[ 11 ]
Total Votes:			[ 24 ]

[Adimurti]

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[Mnemosynee]

Lovers Never Tell

Duel -- Enguarde


Defender: TheAmberShrew
Challenger: Akashya inoue
Bet: 5k
Type of Duel: Flash (2 1/2 hours from time of Enguarde)
Judge I prefer: Lover's Never Tell
Style/Form I prefer: Pantoum
Subject: brothels

Come explore my Red light Bordello

Sirens flash on your hands that dog-leg
on my tits. Your eyes are magnets that touch
loose wires which case my chest like a pillow.
And I can't help but let your fingers dance

on my tits. Your eyes are magnets that touch
my fever skin, desperate to uncase secrets;
and I can't help but let your fingers dance
circles past desperation. Trace your tongue

on fever skin, desperate to uncase secrets—
body from chest to what imagination will allow:
circles past desperation. Trace your tongue,
slither on red coats like a snake; and explore my

body from chest to what imagination will allow.
You're like a puma that pins its prey as you
slither on red coats like a snake; and explore my
body like an open meadow to dust off dry terrain.

You're like a puma that pins its prey as you
cling to skin like a spider, exploring its territorial
body like an open meadow to dust off dry terrain.
Treat me as an infant, and draw me closer to you.

Cling to skin like a spider exploring its territorial
loose wires which case my chest like a pillow.
Treat me as an infant, and draw me closer to you.
Sirens flash on your hands that dog-leg.

[The Love Mutt]

Mahayr

Nicely done, Clarice.

thank you!!!

see my post in HQ, and hopefully the pics in the pic thread in the guild!!

[Mnemosynee]

The Love Mutt

Mahayr

Nicely done, Clarice.

thank you!!!

see my post in HQ, and hopefully the pics in the pic thread in the guild!!

Hi
CLARICE!

[The Love Mutt]

Hullo ^_^

Going to bed soon, but wanted to stop by.

Thread with my regalia item pics:
REGALIA and Choker <3

[TheAmberShrew]

Damn it. I am late.

I'll still do the poem, but I'll just be...late. stressed

[Mnemosynee]

TheAmberShrew

Damn it. I am late.

I'll still do the poem, but I'll just be...late. stressed

It's funny how we all stay up late at the same time, but certain nights one of us is missing.

[TheAmberShrew]

Akashya inoue

TheAmberShrew

Damn it. I am late.

I'll still do the poem, but I'll just be...late. stressed

It's funny how we all stay up late at the same time, but certain nights one of us is missing.

I was literally in the other room for the entire two and a half hours. Fifteen feet away...And then I logged on and...son of a b***h. xd

I'm not going to spend more than an hour doing the poem, in fact...that's it, I'm writing it now. RIGHT NOW.

[TheAmberShrew]

Lovers Never Tell

Duel -- Enguarde


Defender: TheAmberShrew
Challenger: Akashya inoue
Bet: 5k
Type of Duel: Flash (2 1/2 hours from time of Enguarde)
Judge I prefer: Lover's Never Tell
Style/Form I prefer: Pantoum
Subject: brothels

Room 8

Her names Cherry Pie;
frozen, shiny, berry-scented
between golden thighs
tattooed 'pretty demented'.

Frozen, shiny, berry-scented
drinks in her french tips
tattooed 'pretty demented'
in glittered scripts.

Drinks in her french tips
spills over lips and she curses
in glittered scripts
while his mouth reimburses,

spills over lips and she curses
"I want money, not tongue!"
While his mouth reimburses
- muffled, crushed, and half-sung -


( "I want money, not tongue!" )
between golden thighs.
Muffled, crushed, and half-sung;
her names Cherry Pie.

[Mahayr]

Ah tattoos... and brands, haha.

The Love Mutt

Mahayr

Nicely done, Clarice.

thank you!!!

see my post in HQ, and hopefully the pics in the pic thread in the guild!!

Alrighty.

[Lovers Never Tell]

Right, right, so now on to the crit. I found very little wrong if anything at all actually! I'm very happy with the way this turned out. However, what I did indeed find was enough to decide the winner.

Akashya inoue

Lovers Never Tell

Duel -- Enguarde


Defender: TheAmberShrew
Challenger: Akashya inoue
Bet: 5k
Type of Duel: Flash (2 1/2 hours from time of Enguarde)
Judge I prefer: Lover's Never Tell
Style/Form I prefer: Pantoum
Subject: brothels

Come explore my Red light Bordello

Sirens flash on your hands that dog-leg
on my tits. Your eyes are magnets that touch
loose wires which case my chest like a pillow.
And I can't help but let your fingers dance

on my tits. Your eyes are magnets that touch
my fever skin, desperate to uncase secrets;
and I can't help but let your fingers dance
circles past desperation. Trace your tongue

on fever skin, desperate to uncase secrets—
body from chest to what imagination will allow:
circles past desperation. Trace your tongue,
slither on red coats like a snake; and explore my

body from chest to what imagination will allow.
You're like a puma that pins its prey as you
slither on red coats like a snake; and explore my
body like an open meadow to dust off dry terrain.

You're like a puma that pins its prey as you
cling to skin like a spider, exploring its territorial
body like an open meadow to dust off dry terrain.
Treat me as an infant, and draw me closer to you.

Cling to skin like a spider exploring its territorial
loose wires which case my chest like a pillow.
Treat me as an infant, and draw me closer to you.
Sirens flash on your hands that dog-leg.

These lines... WHAT ARE THESE LINES?! Really Luis? I know you to be better than that. It's so tasteless and actually really hard to figure out what you mean. Not only that, but your imagry jumped around pretty bad. If you're gonna stay with a predator/prey thing keep it. Don't go on to how she wishes him to treat her like an infant. It's just staggered.

TheAmberShrew

Room 8

Her names Cherry Pie;
frozen, shiny, berry-scented
between golden thighs
tattooed 'pretty demented'.

Frozen, shiny, berry-scented
drinks in her french tips
tattooed 'pretty demented'
in glittered scripts.

Drinks in her french tips
spills over lips and she curses
in glittered scripts
while his mouth reimburses,

spills over lips and she curses
"I want money, not tongue!"
While his mouth reimburses
- muffled, crushed, and half-sung -


( "I want money, not tongue!" )
between golden thighs.
Muffled, crushed, and half-sung;
her names Cherry Pie.

Amber, though vague, I found to be a lot better. I would've liked a little more in terms of what exactly was going on, but from what you wrote, I got a good enough idea.


All in all the winner is----

TheAmberShrew!!

I'll be sending you your winnings from my mule account.

[TheAmberShrew]

I've never won a duel before. surprised

[Mnemosynee]

TheAmberShrew

I've never won a duel before. surprised

Congrats, Amber. wink

[Mahayr]

Yes, huge congratsulations, Amber!

[knight_of_chivalry]

Quote:

Challenger: The Love Mutt
Defender: knight_of_chivalry
Bet: 5k
Type of Duel: Regular
Judge: Adimurti
Form: Linked Haiku/Senryu
Subject: Open

Our Life at our Back-Yard Ice Rink.

We freeze together
like chaos in a glass bottle,
like fish beneath ice.

We glide on water,
a sub-zero pilgrimage
by two Jesus fish.

In circles we go,
daring the ice to give way,
our gloved hands held tight.

Twisting and dancing
our feet carve two helixes
onto the surface:

we draw our futures
onto clearly melting waters,
smiling at the sun.